how can a poem be cute ?
September 5th, 2008 Posted by: admin
i wrote this poem and my teacher kept going on about how cute it is and i dont get it here it is
Candy Cane
striped
red and white
minty
sweet
a very nice
christmas treat
By: Kailene L
Tags: Candy Cane, Christmas, Poem
September 5th, 2008 at 12:52
i have no clue maybe she has an mental problem or something
September 5th, 2008 at 19:05
Is a perception matter, it rimes, it has a message (cute one) but once again is a personal perception.
September 8th, 2008 at 14:54
Maybe because a candy cane makes one think of happy times. Your poem is delightfully expressing the feelings of childhood enjoyment. That is not to say that only children like candy canes. Your poem makes me think of little “Cindy Who” in “How the Grinch Stole Christmas”. It reminds me of her holding a candy cane & smiling, her big eyes shining.
September 10th, 2008 at 09:38
Your subject matter is cute. The poem is about happy things. It makes the reader smile.
September 11th, 2008 at 22:50
ask ur teacher lor
September 13th, 2008 at 00:03
I’m thinking it is the cadence of the piece. I can picture a “cute” little toddler skipping along reciting this poem holding a candy cane. I don’t think your teacher meant it as a derogatory comment. It would be a nice little verse to attach to a candy cane and give as a little gift! Thanks for sharing.